I’ve had a couple of fairly busy days, so not got a lot done, but today managed 2.2k words, so we’re getting back on track. our hero Marc now has a definite date for his fortune to arrive. On the strength of that he’s signed up for an office in a rather strange office block. It’s run by Pd’E who I think might turn out to be a bit more than the real estate agent that Marc thinks she is.
He’s also got himself a receptionist/assistant, SB after she interviewed him, somewhat aggressively I thought, but then again she is super efficient and might be able to instill in him the discipline he really needs to make a go of the business. Plus she’s a friend of Marc’s new room-mate and between them they can exert a lot of push on the poor hero.
It’s strange how these things happen, but I was sitting and munching on a few crisps, which I don’t normally eat when I thought of the beginnings of what might just turn out to be a major plot line. This is involving his previous boss CB and the two main villains, AC and his evil twin sister SC. Sometimes you need an opportunity to think rather than keep plugging away and on this occasion I think it will work out nicely. I’ve already got a couple of other plot lines in my head. One was always going to be minor and the other, while it would have been major had started to feel a bit like a cliche. That can now become less important and the new major plot line should be both unusual and topical enough to please readers.
Just a bit part for Lucy as yet. But she might just pop up later in the story. It’s coming along quite nicely I think. I do have a tendency to be a bit wordy sometimes but I guess its easier to write too much and then cut it back later than it is to write too little and end up worrying that you need to pad the story out.
8k words so far including 1600 today. Our hero has now got enough money to start his business. Tomorrow he’ll have to find an office and then on to the staff. I’m looking forward to introducing the staff. I’ve got some suitably weird characters lined up. One of the villains SC has at least been mentioned, albeit in passing, but there’s a quite convenient hook to bring her into direct conflict with the hero .
The main villain AC is still waiting out there. I think his relationship with the hero will be similar to that of SC and I can already see just how they work together, at least in this incarnation.
Stay tuned for more story details later.
Not a good title I know but it’s all I have at the moment. Got the main characters sketched out. their names and attributes are more or less set in stone. This is intended to be a fairly black and white story. The good guys and the bad guys should be pretty evident from the start.
Looking for some humour in there which I know can be hard to do, so it’ll be a challenge. I hope that the characters will persist into later books. Not looking for a serial, each should be a stand alone story but using the same characters in different situations. Basically the bad guys try it on and we have to see if/how the good guys can thwart them, I’m not sure they always will.
Main characters include an ex-call centre worker (the hero/narrator) his brother and staff, who I currently know. But they haven’t actually made an appearance in the draft yet. The villain, his evil twin sister and their nanny, plus a daemon, some naive victims of the villain and of course a leprechaun.
And by way of a change from what I normally write this first story is told from a first person perspective. So far I’ve got about 4.5k words done which is a good enough start for a couple of days work so happy enough there.
Sorted out the issue with publishing the paperback version of Never Again it seems there’s a conflict between the latest version of Mac OS and the Print Previewer on Amazon. Fortunately I could use my backup laptop that uses Linux and that worked with no problem.
I’ve ordered my copy of the paperback, should be here on Tuesday. I’ll check that out first and then think about marketing properly.
In the meantime I’ve started on Loose Louche. There’s no expected end date yet. It could be a couple or three months.
Never Again The Prequel to Seven Sisters Series is now published. At least in epub form. For some reason the paperback version is reluctant to complete. Not to worry I’ll have another go at it tomorrow. I only really wanted to publish this version in ebook form anyway.
Next on the list is a thriller, hopefully with some comic elements. Got a few of the characters named and described already, at least in my head. Some of them have already appeared in very short story form over the past eighteen months or so. Got a working title of Loose Louche, but that has to change, obviously.
Once that’s out of the way, I’ll get to work on Maia: Book 2 in Seven Sisters Series. Got the chapter headings for that loosely sorted out.
Hopping from one genre to another should help to avoid getting bored.
Never Again is now fully drafted and has had its first edit. Still not entirely convinced that all the parts are necessary or that they all work, so I’ll probably print it out today some time and read the hard copy. It currently runs to 120 pages but that’s with the extra line spacing that Word seems to put in when I import from Scrivener.
Not to worry, I have styles set up that should take care of all that. Plus I need to separate the whole thing into magaeable chapters and create a Table of Contents for the e-version.
Looks like with a bit of luck I might make this week-end after all.
Strange that editing a completed piece seems to take almost as long as writing it in the first place.
Plus it’s pretty boring as well.
Out until mid-afternoon today so no progress until after then.
The first draft of the prequel is now complete. The final word count was about 31k. And today I managed over 6k words which is rather more than I intended to do in one day but when the mood strikes you, you have to go with it.
Now I’m into editing and some minor re-writing. The Hemingway program is actually very powerful and it really makes you think about how you should be writing the book in the first place. I guess it’s something to aim for, the hope that I can put a book into Hemingway and have it report, ‘Nope, nothing to see here.’
Also decided on a definitive title for the book. it will be named ‘Never Again.’ Which is a quote from one of the characters, not a plea after writing this one.
Do we get closer to the end as we write more? I’ve done another 1500 words this morning and had hoped that I’d be almost done with the first draft by now. Yet I could go on, and on, and on… and still not arrive at an ending.
I still need to read and edit the whole thing and then sort out a cover and I still can’t think of a decent name for the finished product.
I was interrupted for a few minutes of fun this morning, by a call from ‘Jack’ who had pretty good English but with a decidedly Indian accent. He was calling from ‘Microsoft Security’ who he said had just installed a security patch on my Windows computer. He wanted to take over my computer so he could show me and ‘help to keep my computer secure.’ The pity of it was I’m a bit to busy for that sort of help at the moment, plus I don’t actually use a Windows computer. Perhaps he mistook me for someone else. Like maybe an idiot.
I’m not going to get much done this afternoon. Got to go for a saxophone lesson in an hour. Let’s hope I can tie this prequel thing up tonight.
So today I managed around 5k words. I was out this evening or it might have been more!
The big battle scene isn’t quite as big. But I left an opening for a sequel to the prequel! So I guess that will have to do.
The first draft should be done tomorrow or the day after, and then it’s editing and re-writing and prep for publishing. Not sure if it’ll be only ePub or paperback.
Plus of course I need a name for it.