Some Characters
I’ve done some sketches of three of the characters, still got some more to do. Lemmie Prunella Senility
I’ve done some sketches of three of the characters, still got some more to do. Lemmie Prunella Senility
The word count is now around 78k, I’ve still got quite a bit of story to tell and it looks as though the finished work will run to around 85-90k words. We now have the final member of the team in place: MG. He’s already proved his worth with a daring rescue. He’s still struggling […]
In total I received a dozen critiques from Critters Workshop. The general consensus seemed to be good. People like the story and the way it’s being told, although the fact I labelled it incorrectly as a short story rather than a novel confused some of the reviewers. I won’t make that mistake again. I’ve made […]
I submitted the first draft of the first chapter to the Critters Workshop and I’ve now received the results. So far four separate critiques have come in and they all seem to say much the same. The content is good and the story takes them along, however there are some issues with the grammar and […]
Added some action scenes recently. Marc and his team needed to get out more, so they have. Been upsetting the opposition to an extent, although they’re going to have to do a fair bit more of that before they’re done. i just hope it doesn’t get out of hand. LW, Marc’s girl friend is developing […]
Real life has got in the way for the past week or so. and I’ve not been able to keep to my preferred schedule. I’ve been able to get a few words down here and there and move the story along at least a little, just not as much as I’d hoped and of course […]
About 4500 words in the last couple of days. Marc is now in negotiations with LSO and GG about the way forward. He has decided what to do about the task from his first client, and that needs to be implemented; more importantly he is now seeing more clearly what LSO’s position is. This is […]
I’ve now submitted my short story, ‘A Winter’s Tale’ to the Strange Horizons website. Having read a few of their previous stories I’m starting to think that it’s maybe not really ‘strange’ enough. Still, we can only wait and see and nothing lost in the process. In the event that it’s not accepted then I […]
Now that Marc has got GG alone he is trying to get answers as to what is actually going on and what is the meaning of the situation he finds himself in? I’m not too sure of what the answers are myself and I’m writing it all. Going to have to sleep on the problem […]
So Marc and GG have their prize but now have to try and figure a way to get it out without being caught. Easier said than done, especially when they’re both in the same van and it’s not their van, and they’re not even driving it. Getting out might not be the hardest part. They […]