About 4500 words in the last couple of days. Marc is now in negotiations with LSO and GG about the way forward. He has decided what to do about the task from his first client, and that needs to be implemented; more importantly he is now seeing more clearly what LSO’s position is. This is not a bad thing, but it introduces an element of chance that he didn’t originally expect.
By way of a sweetener, I think he’s going to force the introduction of a new member of staff onto his team. This will be LW, mentioned below. It will also be the first member of staff that he has seected entirely by himself. Her background will fit in as an almost exact match for their current project. I think I’ve got a good hook to get her in despite LSO’s earlier adamant stand on refusing to co-operate with outsiders. GG will of course do whatever his boss tells him to. I wonder if that is Marc or LSO?
I’ve now submitted my short story, ‘A Winter’s Tale’ to the Strange Horizons website. Having read a few of their previous stories I’m starting to think that it’s maybe not really ‘strange’ enough. Still, we can only wait and see and nothing lost in the process.
In the event that it’s not accepted then I think I could make a fiull novel out of it relatively easily; just remove the last two paragraphs and take the story on from there.
In the meantime I’ve written an even shorter story for the local critical writing group. I’ve also created a new section on this site that includes some of my short stories. Select ‘Short Stories’ from the menu on the right.
I’ve also started adding to the Loose Louche novel again. After the revelations from LSO it seems Marc has sought refuge in his local pub, where he has re-met with Lucy the Guardian of the Knowledge (LW from now on). There is an obvious attraction between them and although Marc doesn’t yet realise it he is being hooked and landed.
I decided to take a break from leprechauns and private detectives for today. Spent most of the morning working on a short story that is currently entitled – Winter 01. Not very original i know but titles seem to choose themselves when I get to the end of the story.
This is intended to be a detective/police story, set in Victorian times and concerning ‘mysterious goings on’. I suspect that the story will be unfinished, that is there will be no big Agatha Christie type explanation just before the end.
I’m hoping to submit it to Strange Horizons which is an on-line magazine dedicated to ‘speculative fiction.’ It might be worth taking a chance especially as they pay for publications. The only down side I can see is that they insist on 10K absolute maximum and they prefer under 5K. short stories have always been a challenge for me so perhaps having a firm target in mind will do me good.
2500 words today on the short story, I’d previously done about 1,800 words. I think I’m going to have to accept that either I go over the ‘recommended’ 5K limit and take it from there.
Now that Marc has got GG alone he is trying to get answers as to what is actually going on and what is the meaning of the situation he finds himself in?
I’m not too sure of what the answers are myself and I’m writing it all. Going to have to sleep on the problem and come up with some answers myself so that we can move the story along. This is an unusual situation because generally I can see the overall picture in my head and I just need to fill in the detail. At the moment I can see some of the detail but I don’t really know what comes next.
What i do know is that the villains will be really villainous and the good guys will be really good. There is very little space in this story for shades of grey.
i have one main character who has yet to put in an appearance, B. He has more than a whiff of sulfur about him, but he’s the exception to the rule about shades of grey. He has some redeeming features and a serious crush on one of the goodies, Pd’E. We’ll have to see how that pans out.
Been managing around 2000 words a day for the last few days. Now standing around 31K in total. Still a long way to go but at least I can see progress.
So Marc and GG have their prize but now have to try and figure a way to get it out without being caught. Easier said than done, especially when they’re both in the same van and it’s not their van, and they’re not even driving it.
Getting out might not be the hardest part. They have to get back in tomorrow and return the prize before it’s missed.
I’m not entirely sure what the prize actually is. We currently only have the unlikely word of the client, and we don’t know if we can trust her. Possibly (probably ) not.
This wasn’t intended to be the main plot line, just a sort of relatively simple training exercise sort of outing for Marc and the team. It seems to have taken on a whole life of its own and it’s getting more and more complicated the farther into it that Marc moves.
Managed another 2000+ words today. Total word count is now around 26K, which means we’re slightly more than a quarter of the way to the current target figure of 80k.
So Marc and his intrepid team, only GG at the moment, are involved in recovering property for Marc’s first client. It’s rapidly becoming clear that this is a much bigger and harder nut to crack than they had anticipated. Uniform security guards outside, plain clothed security guards inside and CCTV all over the place. I’m not sure if they can actually pull it off – and I’m the one writing it!
No new main characters today, a few minor ones, incidental to what I’m thinking of as ‘the heist’. The premises to be cracked are impressive to the extent of palatial. One problem is, once I start to look at this heist, I immediately start to think of other plots and plot lines leading off from this one. For example, the target was just somebody who ran a few gyms. But the extent of his home and the need for all this security implies a lot more than just a gym owner. Drugs? arms? people trafficking? or given the universe that the story exists in, could it be something even worse?
I’ve set my daily target at 1500 words and on a day with not too much else going on I can easily exceed that, done 1650 tonight so it’s good. Just read a forum post from a very experienced writer who says she can do four 130k word novels a year. that’s something like 1450 words a day, every single day – very impressive.
Been busy for a couple of days so not a lot done, but today achieved the target of 1500 words before noon. Marc has his first client, although it’s a tricky assignment, involving an idea and loads of muscular and violent opponents. There are of course time constraints and problems involved in completing the assignment. But I guess there always will be.
He’s been instructed by SB, his first employee to take on GG as his second. It’s not really clear at this stage who is in charge here. Marc, of course thinks it should be him, while SB, of course knows that it’s her.
What Marc doesn’t know yet is what is the relationship between all of the characters around him. How old is the office building he’s using and just how big is it, really? He’s not really had time to get his bearings yet. So let’s keep him running to stay in the same place.
I’m still without a suitable title, but I am starting to think about a proper cover design rather than the bland ones available on the Amazon Cover Designer site.